#231 The Desert Lord's Baby – Olivia Gates (SD #1872)


Carmen and Farooq were lovers, a three month arrangement which came to an abrupt ending when Carmen discovered she was pregnant and sent Farooq away because they had no future. Sixteen months later Farooq discovers his daughter's existence and insists that Carmen marry him and return to his country but is there any hope their feelings will have survived their separation. How will Farooq react when he learns she can't have any more children? Will Carmen have to accept that
Farooq has to marry a second bride to save his country from war?

I've mentioned before that I don't like alpha males, I don't like Sheikhs and I'm sick of secret baby storiesSurprised. (You can hear Olivia going "oh my God" from hereFoot in mouth)
So we have Farooq who's definitely an alpha Sheikh with a nine-month
old daughter he's only just discovered. He's been hurt by Carmen and is
determined to have his revenge (and how many times have I said I don't
like revenge stories?Sealed)
And yet I fell in love with Farooq from the very first page, when I
understood how strong his feelings for Carmen were, I felt so
devastated for him that she had got the wrong message and was pushing
him away, and that she already knew him so well that she knew EXACTLY
what to say to convince him. Yes Farooq is a Sheikh and used to command
and everyone obeying when he says Jump, and yet he didn't get my
hackles up because his love and respect for Carmen shone through. He
told himself he wanted revenge and he came up with elaborate plans but
when push came to shove he couldn't go through with them. And how could
I but feel sorry for the marvellous moments he missed in the first nine
months of Mennah's life, but also that he realised what else he'd
missed, and that he regretted he hadn't been there to support Carmen
and didn't harp just on the good times he missed. I loved Carmen's
scene with the brothers, it made me very impatient for their stories to
come out (two whole months to wait between each brotherSurprisedCry) Then when
things started going well (plan for several gallons of iced water to
cool you down after the love scenesTongue out)
and I'd feasted my senses on the descriptions of the palace and the
wedding and everything, there's the problem about her hysterectomy and
how he'll react when he finds out, and the problem of the state
marriage and how Carmen will react to that.

Now y'all know how happy I was to have another Damian episode
because I just love Damian, well (don't tell him Olivia) Farooq is
snapping at his heels in the popularity stakes and I strongly suspect
Shehab and Kamal will be very close behind. So much for not being a fan
of Sheikhs and alpha heroesUndecided.
This definitely qualifies as the first in the April raining men
challenge. Olivia can rain men on me any time she likes, Farooq and his
brothers definitely fit my bill! I suppose that the fact that I bought
the ebook straight away because I couldn't wait any longer once I'd
read the excerpt speaks for itself, as does the fact that I got dug in
the minute I got home from work and then blogged it straight away
despite interruptions with DH wanting me to cook the dinner, put the
kids to bed and generally take care of everything so that he can read
the book he's been impatiently awaiting since yesterday (you'll notice
I finished my book, and he's not even on chapter three of his Smile Innocent) Some of us just get our priorities right - everyone's fed and the boys are in their bedrooms supposedly asleepKiss

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Great Review

Sadhbh - Hey - it's a great review! Just one thing though:

you wrote  - How will Farooq react when he learns
she can't have any more children? Will Carmen have to accept that Farooq has to marry a second bride to save his country from war?

I'm assuming this is because Carmen has given him a daughter and he needs a male heir?

And I agree with you...it's okay, I just checked and Olivia is not on-line at the moment Wink... but I don't like alpha males either!

But Damian...ooohhhhh...And I know it's because of the way Olivia wrote him...loving Calista while realizing that she probably couldn't love him back because of his own actions. That gets me every time - especially when the guy admits his feelings before the end of the book!

About ST...so if it wasn't published, how could you read it?

Sadhbh!!!!!!

we have Farooq who's definitely an alpha Sheikh with a nine-month old daughter he's only just discovered. He's been hurt by Carmen and is determined to have his revenge (and how many times have I said I don't like revenge stories?Sealed)

 You really know how to play with a girl's nerves, don't you?Cry

And yet I fell in love with Farooq from the very first page.. 

Phew!!! (where's the enervated with relief emoticon when you need one??Embarassed) And I'm SO glad you continued to love him througout the book. Laughing 

I loved Carmen's scene with the brothers, it made me very impatient for their stories to come out (two whole months to wait between each brotherSurprisedCry)

So happy that scene whetted your appetite for them. If you loved Farooq, just wait until you meet Shehab, then Kamal.Wink

 (plan for several gallons of iced water to cool you down after the love scenesTongue out)

LaughingKiss

feasted my senses on the descriptions of the palace and the wedding and everything

Oh, my! This is definitely going into the excerpt I'll put on my website from your review, with a link back here, of course, for everyone to read that fabulous review in full!!!  

Now y'all know how happy I was to have another Damian episode because I just love Damian, well (don't tell him Olivia) Farooq is snapping at his heels in the popularity stakes and I strongly suspect Shebab and Kamal will be very close behind.

I'M sure not telling Damian Farooq is now almost on par with him, and from one book, too.Surprised But then, you know Damian, he seems to find out everything anyway... Wink As for Shehab and Kamal, after you meet them for real in their own books, you can tell me in September if you have an order of preference, in total confidentiality of course. Sealed(but then they're all such far-reaching lords of all they survery, they'd probably find out the results of our survey. Laughing

But omigod, this most of all stuns me. That any hero can compete with Damian in your eyes.SurprisedLaughing Farooq is that potent, eh?

So much for not being a fan of Sheikhs and alpha heroesUndecided.

This has just got to be the best compliment an author can get, that I made you like the very things you dislike. Yay.Laughing

 This definitely qualifies as the first in the April raining men challenge. Olivia can rain men on me any time she likes, Farooq and his brothers definitely fit my bill!

And I'm delighted to keep raining men on you. I planning on a constant downpour. Laughing

I suppose that the fact that I bought the ebook straight away because I couldn't wait any longer once I'd read the excerpt speaks for itself, as does the fact that I got dug in the minute I got home from work and then blogged it straight away despite interruptions

And I'm just THRILLED by your review. I was really bating my breath over this book's reception. I'm also thrilled the excerpt had that effect.

you'll notice I finished my book, and he's not even on chapter three of his Smile Innocent) Some of us just get our priorities right - everyone's fed and the boys are in their bedrooms supposedly asleepKiss

Thank you so much, Sadhbh, for buying the book and blogging about it that
quickly. My! Has anyone ever told you your reading speed, and the
precision and attention to detail in which you do it in,
is humbling? This has to be a super power!SurprisedKiss

And OK, I've got a question I have to ask. I get it that alpha males aren't everyone's cup of tea, and they're not yours (or Anita Mae's) So how do you love Damian that much (and in your case, now Farooq, too) who're both the ultimate in alphaness, to coin a word? 

But you won't see me complaining.  Wink I'm just so thrilled you liked the book and Farooq and that much. Laughing

Sil Desire
Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Olivia - there's a particular category of alpha males

that seem to be domineering and arrogant and self-important and
disrespectful of women and the h and the H spend their time trading
insults and fighting and yet on page 190 they do a complete turnaround
because they're suddenly in love

That's the kind of "alpha" male
I can't stand, but as I've said Farooq doesn't fit that bill. His
respect for Carmen came across from the start and he only got angry
with her because she shot him down in flames, so how could I not love
him, he didn't do anything to trigger my "bad" hot buttons (he can
trigger the other hot buttons Wink as much as he likes Laughing)

Hugs

Sadhbh 

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now more than ever

looking forward to getting my hands on it

Alpha Males

Sadhbh, that's it! that's it!

You nailed it when you said '...yet on page 190 they do a complete turnaround because they're suddenly in love.

Usually when I read books with alpha males, I get the impression that the author is excusing his 'jerkiness' because that's the way alpha males are supposed to behave.

But when Olivia writes, she proves that a man can be the king of his own castle without stepping on his subjects. I respect men like that. I also respect men who aren't afraid to show their feelings prior to page...what was it?...oh yes...190. Laughing

After reading Olivia's comments, I realized that when I wrote my book review of Radical Cure, I barely mentioned Damian. Now, I'm trying to figure out why and I think I've got it.

I'm used to getting in the heads of the H as well as the h and this wasn't happening with the 1st person thing. Usually it takes me a while to get the hang of it but not this time...like I said in the review, I couldn't put it down and was totally drained when I did.

Where does Damian come in when I couldn't get his POV? I'm surprised to say this, but ...sssshhh...I didn't even miss it. I'm whispering here because I don't want the editors to hear that remark and have everyone go back to just the h's POV.

What I really think is that Olivia has designed a new hybrid alpha male. One who embodies all the best of being a man of substance.  I mean, those nano thingies must be good for something other than making you sick, huh?

and thanks to Penni who silently agrees with all I've

said Laughing

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Yes, well, why not keep the

Yes, well, why not keep the conversation in one place? Besides, I finally remembered how to make a link from my review to yours, so it's there and people don't have to hunt you down -- one click, and here they are! I'm sure it works b/c that's how I got here!

I'm thinking I might like Olivia's Desires best . . . I'll have to read her current medical and more Desires before I let you know for sure Wink.

Penn 

Sadhbh...LOL

You said

 

there's a particular category of alpha males that seem to be domineering and arrogant and self-important and disrespectful of women

Well, I don't know, Sadhbh, I wouldn't call such men alpha males. These sounds like bullys-cum-jerks who've come into the world without senses of humor and perspective installed.

 

To me, alpha males are too secure to want to keep proving they're above all who breathe, too truly superior they don't feel the need to lord it over all others (not without a very good reason, and no other method to fulfill their goal)! They might have had reason to distrust women's motivations towards them, but they innately like and respect women, don't lump them all in one generalization, and they are exhilarated when they meet their match, want to be there for her to help her realize her full potential. They're powerful, protective, cherishing...and they can laugh at their own mistakes, even when they know they don't have shortcomings. And they say sorry beautifully, and confess and prove their love memorably. THAT'S the kind of alpha male I write. Laughing

but as I've said Farooq doesn't fit that bill. His
respect for Carmen came across from the start and he only got angry with her because she shot him down in flames, so how could I not love him, he didn't do anything to trigger my "bad" hot buttons (he can trigger the other hot buttons Wink as much as he likes

So glad Farooq, being a sheikh and all, managed to hit all your "good" hot buttons. Just the ones I was aiming for. Wink

Can't wait for your opinion of Shehab and Kamal!! 

Sil Desire
Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Anita Mae!!

when Olivia writes, she proves that a man can be the king of his own
castle without stepping on his subjects. I respect men like that. I
also respect men who aren't afraid to show their feelings prior to
page...what was it?...oh yes...190. Laughing

I'm thrilled this is how you see my alpha males, because this is exactly what I want to put across, what I believe a true alpha male is. If I can't 'like' the guy, thoroughly, no matter how hot he is, he becomes patently resistible.  

After reading Olivia's comments, I realized that when I wrote my book review of Radical Cure, I barely mentioned Damian. Now, I'm trying to figure out why and I think I've got it.

OMG, you wrote a review of Radical Cure???? When? Where? 

I'm used to getting in the heads of the H as well as the h and this
wasn't happening with the 1st person thing. Usually it takes me a while
to get the hang of it but not this time...like I said in the review, I
couldn't put it down and was totally drained when I did.

Ooooh!!!EmbarassedKiss

But that was 'good' drained?? 

Where does Damian come in when I couldn't get his POV? I'm surprised
to say this, but ...sssshhh...I didn't even miss it. I'm whispering
here because I don't want the editors to hear that remark and have
everyone go back to just the h's POV.

So you don't feel you missed knowing anything about Damian seeing him only through Calista's eyes and thoughts and his out loud actions and words. I'm simply thrilled yet again that another reader loved Damian without being inside his head.

That brings me to a decision I've been grappling with. I've been writing an alternate history paranormal, and I've written the first 100 pages in 1st POV, intending the whole book to be this way. But I've been toying with turning it into a multiple POV book, thinking that this might improve its chances and have a wider audience embrace it if such a chance comes to pass. What do you all think? 

What I really think is that Olivia has designed a new hybrid alpha
male. One who embodies all the best of being a man of substance.

OK. Now THIS is an incredible statement. The kind of quote an author dreams to have on her books and promo. Can I quote you?

Sil Desire
Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Christa

I hope you enjoy it when you finally get your hands on it!Laughing

Sil Desire
Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Penn!!

Yes, well, why not keep the conversation in one place? Besides, I
finally remembered how to make a link from my review to yours, so it's
there and people don't have to hunt you down -- one click, and here
they are! I'm sure it works b/c that's how I got here!

You wrote a review of The Desert Lord's Baby???

OK, it just occured to me if I type my name in the search I'd come up with everything that mentioned my name? With the reviews included? If yes, and this is how you ladies find everything around here, all I can suy is...Doh!Embarassed

I'm thinking I might like Olivia's Desires best . . .

I'm thrilled you think so. My Desires have been the most pure writing pleasure I've ever had (since I didn't interrupt the writing for research) and I'm glad it showed and transferred my pleasure to you.

Sil Desire
Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Oh no another alpha male discussion!

The problem is, as Vince has argued convincingly, that everyone uses the term, alpha male, but the term has a different meaning for everyone, making the term inappropriate for discussing the hero's behavior.  I wish this term could be retired and several different terms inaugurated, one for each of the "alpha male" definitions. *sigh* Never gonna happen.Wink

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LOL FF

Yep, it's an eternal discussion. I said what an alpha male is to me, the kind of hero I write, and though my heroes have been very different, they had thos equalities at their core. But I guess the only male I don't like to give the term alpha is the intentionally nasty one. But then it could be argued, in each story's case, that he had reason, was under false impressions, that he was lashing out to defend his heart...etc. and that he redeems himself beautifully at the end. And in this case, well...it all comes down to another eternal statement. It's all in the execution. Laughing

 And oooh, CONGRATS on being March's Member of the Month!!!!LaughingKiss

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THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Merci Olivia!

Wink

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This one is on

This one is on it's way to me so hopefully I'll have it in my hands soon. After all this discussion I can't wait to read it.

Deb!

Did you see my message in the comments on Sadhbh's Shock Therapy review?

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Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Alpha's in Med's

Interesting discussion re Alpha's.

I was wondering if you agreed Olivia that medical romance heroes fit this "nice" Alpha bill perfectly. Highly successful men that have risen to the top of their field, confident and commanding but have that compassionate side to them that makes them so much more likeable, hopefully lovable....

Amy

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I certainly agree with you Amy!

the alpha heroes in the Meds are awesome ... perfectly balanced ....

I love alpha heroes ... but then I'm biased, I have my very own!  LOL .....  it's rare I'll have a problem with any of the alpha heroes in any of the lines, including Presents ... I'm not overly fond of the "ruthless revenge" stories, esp. some that have carried over to Desire, those can be particalarly harsh ... usually I'll have a problem if the author doesn't give enough insight into the heroes psyche, esp. in the older Presents where the heroes POV was rarely given ....

but back to Olivia's alphas! .... oh my  Embarassed   ... I just adore experiencing their thoughts ... Olivia does great angst! 

 

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Amy

I was wondering if you agreed Olivia that medical romance heroes fit
this "nice" Alpha bill perfectly. Highly successful men that have risen
to the top of their field, confident and commanding but have that
compassionate side to them that makes them so much more likeable,
hopefully lovable....

 Indeed, I agree, Amy!  A Medical hero is an alpha in his purest form, powerful, resourceful, take-charge, highly skilled and refined through and through. But I believe it's the protection and compassion that he is so well equipped to provide that make him unique among all alpha males.

I once wrote an article about what makes a Medical hero a so sexy and irresistible. Hmm...I should have it on my website...

Sil Desire
Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Katherine

but back to Olivia's alphas! .... oh my  Embarassed   ... I just adore experiencing their thoughts ... Olivia does great angst! 

Thrilled you like my alphas. AND my angst. Laughing

I can't wait for your opinion on my Desire alphas!!!

As for getting inside the heroes heads and psyches, I'm really curious to see how you'll react to my Bombshell alpha, Damian, if you ever get around to reading the books. Since we're never in his head, I wonder how you'll react to him, what you'll think of the way I presented him through the heroine's eyes and senses, and through his own actions and words. 

 

Sil Desire
Throne of Judar
THE DESERT LORD'S BABY—RT 4.5 stars TOP PICK, eHarlequin #1 eBook Bestseller—May 08
THE DESERT LORD'S BRIDE—Jul 08
THE DESERT KING—Sep 08
Med Romance
THE SHEIKH SURGEON'S PROPOSAL—Apr 08
http://www.oliviagates.com

Please do

Hey Olivia - please do put the article on your website. I'd love to read it.

Amy

Found: A Father For Her Child. Carrie and Charlie's story OUT NOW. Also on e-book.
Join the medrom authors at their hot new blog Love Is The Best Medicine. www.medicalromance.blogspot.com

okay...

okay, okay... I am convinced and will give this one a try, Sadhbh!

you for the full price - I can't say fairer than that!

But I think my wallet is safe Laughing

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The verdict is in....

and your wallet is safe!!!  Wink

And I've now decided I'm going to play close attention to what you say about alpha males as you summarized exactly what my fears were about this book and yet the hero really shined! 

I'm glad for Olivia

Smile, but I wasn't worried for my wallet Innocent

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