DAD IN DISGUISE by Kate Little, SSE, March 08.
Thanks to his deisre to leave bdesirea genetic legacy--and thanks to a blue-eyed beauty named Rachel Reilly--Jack Sawyer now had a son. He knew he had no right to play daddy, but he was determined to make sure this woman, whom he had never met, was a loving parent.
Rachel was unaware that Jack was the sperm-bank donor who had fathered her baby. She only knew that her reaction to the strikingly handsome man who had suddenly appeared in her life was unfamiliar...and undeniable. But what would she do when she learned that attraction wasn't the half of what had brought them together?
This is the first book in the "Baby Daze" trilogy. I really like this story, but I did have a problem with the editing job. I found many, many instances where there was a missing word in a sentence (in, the she, it, at, he, etc) or two of the same word in a sentence that were missed in editing. It was quite frustrating to me and ended up making this book a slow read for me. I only hope that the next two books in the trilogy don't have this same issue.







It seems editing is a major
It seems editing is a major problem at many publishing houses these days. Missing words, misspelled words such as plane for plain, sentences that don't make any sense.
I'm glad some else cared enough to mention it.
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Editing
Harlequin is pretty good with it's editing, w-w-w, so I was quite surprised at the extent of the issues in this book. I just ordered the other two books from this trilogy and I hope it's not still a problem. *fingers crossed*