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Writer's Challenge 3
Do you like to write for fun? Looking for a quick critique, or a warm up exercise? Whatever your reasons for picking up the proverbial pen, or if you just love to read, you’ve come to the right place. Rub your hands together in anticipation, get your idea’s brewing, and have fun.
On your marks...get ready...WRITE!
• Click here Challenge Rules or Judging Information.







Am I first??
Oh, boy! I'm typing fast in an effort to snag #1!!
Ronda
Hey...nice new digs!Let
Hey...nice new digs!
Let the decorating begin!!
Teachlu7...I don't own a red pen...but am quite partial to purple and green...somehow "purple pen you" doesn't convey the same message...
My students confuse where and were...and always write alot instead of a lot...I'm not sure what my most common mistakes are, there are simply so many...but my handwriting is atrocious...
Sorry about the insane hours for you guys...Idon't budge before 6:00 and 6:30 if I can get away with it...of course, I only live five miles from my schools...
Ronda
Their and There and Theyre
I get those three confused as well as its and it's. I'm an English
major and I get those confused. Oh, and you'll find that I get your and
you're confused; as well as my grammar. You will also find that I use
ain't alot.
For those interested, a Nocturne chat will take place tonight at 9 pm EST (dont ask me the other timezones, please.)
Lou Gagliardi
Published author and all around good guy
you can find me at lgagliardi25@hotmail.com or lougagliardi24@gmail.com
New Challenge
Challenge for MAY 30th...
1000 words or less
3 criteria:
Setting: Deserted tropical island...
Characters :Alpha male vs. Alpha female
They DO NOT know the other is on the island, first meeting
"What the..." (fill in) somewhere in dialogue
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
willing to judge
want to see what it is like on the other side so would like to volunteer to be a judge this round...I am still going to write the piece but only for the practise...
Write on everyone:)
Peace out...
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
Correct me if I am worong...
But arent you automatically the judge if you won the last round???
Katie~
"Your Life is an occasion. Rise to it"
Mr. Magorium
About the judging
Yes, the rules state that the first 3 volunteers can be the judges.
However, since I started playing on this board last summer, it's always been the winner of one challenge will automatically judge the next and ask for volunteers if he/she wishes.
I actually like it the way we're doing it.
It's like: you win, you get a reward. And you can share it if you wish.
That's about the only reward we get for the hours we put into our entries.
What say the rest of you?
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"Current Challenge" Solved!
I've found a way to make the current challenge accessible by clicking! WHEEEEE!
Lou--I'll do my best to pop into the Noc Chat tonight (would you believe I'm actually WRITING a para???), but I can't promise. It all depends on what my little terrorists allow tonight. :)
Hugs all!
Dee
PS--Also, did you set yourselves a chat date, I didn't see. I'm the chat scheduler, so...just need to know when you want it. :) Hee hee!
Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."
ok
I went to the challenge rules and didn't see that the winner turns into the judge but that certainly seems fair to me...so I will be looking for volunteers to judge but dont feel you have to shout out yet...
Sorry for being such a newbie but this way other newbies can learn the ropes as well...
I am really enjoying myself on this site...it has been interesting to read others writing...and to write for the challenges. I like emailing others as well, and getting to know each of you...
Lou, I haven't forgotten you...I am going to try to get those books out to you this weekend...end of the year is always so busy...and it seems as though the end of year stuff is so involved...I was asked to speak a tribute for a retiring teacher so need to work on that...and I have been haranging 90 staff to contribute to the PPSTA raffle for student scholarships...someone suggested moving the raffle to earlier in the year because the retirement parties are expensive, and the gifts for the retirees as well. Plus, I run the little school store and will be putting that to bed at the end of the month, and ordering supplies early. but the store is fun... and some day I might get to retire so I want people to come to my retirement party, right? So it is all in the works for now...
dang, no wonder I am so tired! But this summer is for writing...
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
Dee
thanks for setting up the current challenge with such easy access...i don't know how many times I had to do a search for the last one to check something:)
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
No Prob...
Of course, now I'll have to keep up with you guys like white on rice, lol.
Dee
Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."
Dee
It's at 9pm est tonight (that goes for nini if she reads this)
if your the chat schedular, could you please make note that the nocturne alternates the start times, here's a copy of our schedule to the month of october:
May-21-9pm EST
June-18-8pm EST
July-16-9pm EST
August-20-8pm EST
September-17-9pm EST
October-15 (regular chat)-8pm EST
October 31 (Friday-Halloween Chat)-9pm EST (OPTIONAL)
Lou Gagliardi
Published author and all around good guy
you can find me at lgagliardi25@hotmail.com or lougagliardi24@gmail.com
I read....
I'm here. I'm heading to the chat. I just got back from a very first meeting of a romance book club at the local library. Gail Barrett was there too!!! She's cool!
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
Grammar...
Thanks for all your advice on getting some writing and grammar books. Out of the 4 suggested, I have two so far, The Elements of Style and On Writing by Stephen King.
I started reading the Stephen King one last night and I have to say, I was laughing so hard I had tears streaming down my face. And that was just the first couple of chapters! He is amazing.
sbwriter, I sent you an email. Overdue, sorry.
Judy
'Contrary to what many of you may imagine, a career in letters is not without its drawbacks - chief among them the unpleasant fact that one is frequently called upon to sit down and write.' Fran Lebowitz
Mornin' everyone....
The Nocturne chat was fun last nite! I wish more of you had come. Jules was there, as was Star and Fandl...myself included. Oh...and Nudie Lou. (sorry! I just had to add that in).........
Spoke with an author or two...got to read the beginning of a book (very very cool!)....and have fun with some friends.
Thanx Lou for the invite!
Just an FYI...
I was driving into work today and saw this absolutely gorgeous man, dressed in full military dress getting into a big pick up truck. My mind was racing and thinking of all the things i could do with that man and his truck...
I got to work, got settled and sat down to type. Fifteen minutes later, i've got just under 800 words of, what i think could be, a spice brief! Nice...i like when that happens.
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
Question for you all...............
If you read my previous comment, i have a question.
"Do you take real life things, like i did this morning, and fantasize about them enough to write a story? Or do you have to think long and hard (pardon the pun) about what to write?"
Inquiring mind (mine) wants to know.
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
using real life
of course i use real life situations to help spur on the creative muse. my family is well aware that anything that happens may end up in an animated short. - or a story. *evil grin*
some of my heros are created from some of the most interesting guys i've met.
Don't argue with idiots. They will drag you down and then beat you with experience.
"Life is pain Highness, anyone who tells you otherwise is selling you something." - Dred Pirate Roberts, The Princess Bride
chat and story inspiration
Sorry I couldn't make the noc chat. I have a flash fiction course wednesday nights through june. When I got home at 9pm dh was on the computer... :(
Maybe next time...
Nini - You'll have to let me take a look at your soldier. lol. My muse works in scenes. All of my stories start out as this great scene I want to write. Once I get the scene out on paper, it normally comes out a little different than how it was in my mind. Sometimes better, sometimes not. Either way...I find that the characters start developing histories and personalities and go from there.
FWIW,
SueB
Nini...yeah!
Definitely draw from life around me...maybe not as quickly as you
but like others...anything that happens in my life or around me is fair game!
In fact, the hero in my WIP is based on one of my favorite ex-boyfriends...and he knows it...I told him it was the only way I could change him...LOLOL DH thinks it's kind of warped, but we're all friends, so he gets a good chuckle...
Ronda
Nini
LOL I work at West Point (US Military Academy) You would be like a kid in the candy store there......
Katie~
"Your Life is an occasion. Rise to it"
Mr. Magorium
I'll take THAT one!!
Katherine, we'd ALL be like a kid in the candy store there...except maybe Lou and Vince
Ronda
Definitely not a kid...
But in a candy store - yep! Dress whites, dress blues, dress...or undress! Love 'em!
Was in Annapolis many years ago when a ship came in...i was in my glory!!
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
Lulu - excellent
Lulu - excellent challenge!
I was at the cafe having a coffee while the kids were at the library and teen dd looks over my shoulder to see what I was scribbling. I told her it was a list of possible scenarios for the 'desert island'.
She says, "You gotta have a stalker, Mom!"
I rolled my eyes b/c to her, a book isn't 'great' unless it has a stalker. (She practically knocks me over if I have a LI Suspense in my hand.)
I told her she should write one with a stalker but she said she didn't have time. Then she flounced off to chat with a friend about the 3 hrs of reality TV she'd watched the night before!
So, I'm getting quite excited except for one problem...only 1,000 words?
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Scratching head...
Confused. Do you WANT the Noc chat to alternate on the start times? Otherwise I'm wondering how you'd have the schedule, lol. Help? If you prefer, you can email me your answer and we can set things up off site. :)
Alas, I wasn't able to hop on because I was being a food source right about then. Then the girls went cannibal---I'm considering slathering mustard all over Noelle so Nia will stop biting her. She cut the skin last night. Sigh...
Dee
Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."
Chat
It's really not that hard. June chat starts at 8, July chat starts at 9, etc and etc. but sure if you want me to email you, whats your email?
Lou Gagliardi
Published author and all around good guy
you can find me at lgagliardi25@hotmail.com or lougagliardi24@gmail.com
2 problems
West point cadets are pretty raw looking with their bald heads and thick black bands holding on their glasses...and they are babies...definitely love a man in uniform but he has to be a man...more maturity and liviing make a heck of a lot more interesting conversation...but then a blaze isn't really about conversation, is it?
must be me...when I was in my early 30's, on e of my 15 year old son's friends developed a cruch on me...to say the least, it was creepy and grossed me out! I was his older fantasy woman (Double yuck!)
but then I went and married a baby 2nd time around...he was 29 and i was 36...which is okay until you do the math...when I was 21 he was 14...and i have to admit that the sight of him in those little gym shorts he wore had me salivating...but I was in my 30's so you all know how that is
even though he is going to be 47 this summer, he still rocks my world
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
anita mai
Thank you...after I posted it I looked at the challenge and thought...too simple? but then when it's simple the writer's can use more imagination and range, right?
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
Nini...love your new
Nini...love your new pic!
smooches!
www.julianastone.com
Jules...
Thanx...it's been there for WEEKS!!! So glad you finally noticed.
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
Not every military man at
Not every military man at West Point is a student
and the ones that are, aren't all 18
I'm just sayin'...
Ronda
NINi...I had your old pic
NINi...I had your old pic showing until the day before yesterday! The one with the blue top.....weird eh? I'd have noticed your pretty little face as soon as you changed it!
are you working today?
www.julianastone.com
36 and 29, huh? Do we have a
36 and 29, huh? Do we have a cougar in our midst? Just teasing,,.. that's not so big a difference. My sister is 46 and she went out with a guy that was 24! She met him on match dot com. Yeah...he actually winked at her first. She's was like, "um, do you nkow how old I am?" and he was like, "d*mn straight, I like older women!" And she said he was really yummy - reallly cute.
my email: starr_girl1@yahoo.com
Nini, a man in uniforn is
Nini, a man in uniforn is very sexy.. even better out, I agree! LOL. And about what you asked earlier...sometimes I get ideas from anywhere.. just a what if while driving down the road, a song, seeing someone - or a couple - cross the street, a fantasy, a dream, or even a memory.
my email: starr_girl1@yahoo.com
Pass the bucket
Just mailed out my first nocturne ms. Postman said Tara Gavin over at nocturne will have it on Tuesday.
Ack!
Feel a little sick, but excited, too. Now all I can do is wait...
SueB
love them men in uniforms!
it don't matter what kind of uniform either. my man was Navy and a scuba diver to boot. i think he looks sooooo sexy when he's got all his scuba gear on. mmmm...
woo hooo sue! got my fingers crossed for you! congrats on sending!
Don't argue with idiots. They will drag you down and then beat you with experience.
"Life is pain Highness, anyone who tells you otherwise is selling you something." - Dred Pirate Roberts, The Princess Bride
Sue...
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That was typing with crossed fingers! What it actually says is:
Congrats and way to go!!! Whether accepted or not, you've done something fabulous!
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
I've been having very sensual dreams...
involving men in uniform and handcuffs. Every single night. Every freakin' single night....
Ack!!!!!!!!!
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
Jules...
Yep - that was weird all right....
Yes i'm at school - i have a class in 15 minutes so i took the time to come and see you all before i have to deal with 6th graders and I-search projects. I hate grading that stuff.
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
One year......
My husband Jerry bought a black jeep wrangler (we still have it) and when we went to pick it up, he was wearing:
Black boots
Black tee shirt
Black leather vest
Black jeans
I said.................**THUD** OOOhhh baby!!!!
After 20 years, and all the weight we've both put on...if that man puts on the same outfit (in a different size), i'd still jump his bod!
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
I have the feeling...
Nini is bored, lol.
My poor hubby occasionally has to hide from me, so I know your pain. Can we help it we have good taste in guys?
Dee
Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."
uniforms
seen some pretty hot UPS guys...
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
UPS, LOL. I just thought of
UPS, LOL. I just thought of Legally Blonde, ya know, when he comes in to the salon to tell her he's got a package....
my email: starr_girl1@yahoo.com
Nini
It's a sign...write the story...one woman, and a troop of all men...all want her...but she only wants the one she can't have...because...he is....gay!!! sorry, couldn't help myself, got carried away...ok he's married to a woman who is brain dead and lingering... that gives it pathos and makes it ok for the hot sex scenes...and in the end she can gracefully expire leaving him free to marry the hot babe who loves men in uniforms.
tada!
ever searching...getting there one step at a time lulu
Weeeelllll..........
I've got a storyline going now....on the side, so to speak. Six men, one woman, and then they find women. They've just resigned from the Rangers, and no, not the Power Rangers.
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
6 men and 1 woman? Whew
6 men and 1 woman? Whew girl!!!!!! Let's see, how would you choregraph that one?.. um, one over there.. and one here, oh no I mean behind here...oh and two right here and here. and.....Sheesh!
Good thing they all find their own woman or that would be one tired heroine!
my email: starr_girl1@yahoo.com
Nini
I think you and your DH need to lock yourselves in the bedroom this weekend.
my email: starr_girl1@yahoo.com
You girls kill me
Nini, go get yourself some of that handsome hubby. ;)
If someone could pull off 6 heros and one heroine, I'd love to read it.... heh
SueB, whose already had 2 glasses of wine to celebrate her vacation...
LMAO!
I never said that ALL the men were for one heroine...But i do have glimmers of ideas floating.
Nini :)
Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot
Powerful Women's Motto:
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...
'Oh hell! She's awake!!'
You know what's sad...
You said six men and one heroine and even with my dirty mind, all I could think was...God, the LAUNDRY pile!
I've just got two males and I can't keep up! (No offense, Lou!)
Dee
Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."
LOL, you had me cracking up
LOL, you had me cracking up Dee. It is a sad day when instead of drooling over 6 handsome men in uniforms, you are only thinking about the laundry. But at the same time, I so hear you.
BTW, the mention of UPS men...One day at work our cute UPS man was doing a delivery that needed a signature. I signed and he asked me if I lived on...and he named my road. The other women in the office were all waggling their eyebrows at me. As soon as he left I was quizzed by every woman there. Can I help it if my one daughter has meds delivered every 2 weeks and they require a signature?
Nancy