Q&A with Spice Editor Susan Pezzack Swinwood
by Anonymous on March 3rd, 2008, 6:00am
Spend five days getting to know your favorite Spice Editor! Ask all those pesky little detail questions that don't let you sleep at night about Spice and Spice Briefs!

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Hi everyone, It's been a
Hi everyone,
It's been a while since I've done a Q&A on the community, and it's good to be back! Hopefully my limited computer skills won't be too obvious...we'll see if this first post makes it to the thread!
As many of you know, I'm the editor in charge of both Spice and Spice Briefs, and I'm also part of the MIRA team. I know there have been lots of questions circulating about the erotica programs, and I hope that this forum will satisfy everyone's curiosity.
So...let me have it! Start asking away, and I'll do my best to set everything straight.
How would you feel about
How would you feel about clown erotica?
M
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If anyone could pull if off,
If anyone could pull if off, it would be you, Megan! Smart aleck.
THERE WAS NOTHING FUNNY
THERE WAS NOTHING FUNNY ABOUT THEIR PASSION...the story of clowns in lust. The car scene alone would be amazing.
One. Two. Three. Four...how many can fit inside?
M
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That does it, you're getting
That does it, you're getting such a slap!
Susan, that's a totally
Susan, that's a totally different kind of story!
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Hiya Susan! I'm still
Hiya Susan!
I'm still working on Barnyard Tales, I know how thrilled you said you'd be to get my torrid tales of love in a corral...
What's your take on single author anthologies?
Lauren
Lauren Dane
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Holiday Seduction with Jaci Burton - November
Undercover - Berkley Heat - December 2
What Happens in Vegas...After Dark - May 09
I would like to know that,
I would like to know that, too.
Not the part about the barnyard. About the single author anthos.
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Megan, keep your mitts off
Megan, keep your mitts off my cow shifters with fake leather daddy hats! (fake leather = pleather because yannow, cows woudln't wear real leather - that's a bit too edgy I'd say)
Lauren
Lauren Dane
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Holiday Seduction with Jaci Burton - November
Undercover - Berkley Heat - December 2
What Happens in Vegas...After Dark - May 09
Oooh...
So do paranormals fit in Spice Briefs? Like, what if I had one on 100 year grasshopper-changelings? "All We Have Is Tonight" has a nice ring to it. (PS--do the characters have to survive?)
DeeDee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."
...oh, man...the smacking
...oh, man...the smacking is going start going around any minute, now...
Well, Susan, clearly you're a formidable, scary editor whose authors quake with fear at discussing things with you. Run away potential authors! Run away, I say! Writing for Spice is scary! We never have any fun! It's like working in a salt mine!
M
PS-- I really would like to hear about single author anthos and what you'd look for and what would make your eyes bleed.
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That's it. I knew Dee was
That's it. I knew Dee was crazy, but now she has rubbed off on Megan.
Just so you know, Susan, Megan has converted me to Spice. The first one I read was all crude sex and no real story. Megan makes the characters come to life.
Now, about that clown story. I'd read that… if Megan wrote it.
"Saving the future, one presidential edict at a time."
March's Member of the Month--2008
Couple of Questions
Okay, I guess I'll come forward with a couple of questions.
I made a first attempt at writing a spice brief. It's dark, with a hint of paranormal. In the end one of the main characters dies.
Would Spice Briefs consider something like that? I'm editing now and wondering if I should make the mood lighter and change the ending to make it "happier". I kind of like it as it is, but if it doesn't fit the line... I'll try to come up with something else.
Also, what is the view on swearing? Do you feel it detracts from the story? Would you prefer not to see it at all, only in moderation, or anything goes (its all in the execution)?
Thanks in advance for your help!
SueB, slinking back into lurkdom
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Am I allowed to say "ass"?
Because Lauren and Megan, you are asses. You both get a time-out.
Historical
Historical submissions--what are you getting a lot of? What aren't you getting, that you want? What historical period do you never want to see again?
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Victoria Janssen
The Duchess, Her Maid, The Groom and Their Lover, Harlequin Spice, 12/08
Moonlight Mistress, Harlequin Spice, 12/09
http://www.victoriajanssen.com/
Hi Susan
I'm still trying to think of a question... I'm just here to say 'hello' really, and say thanks for accepting my story for Spice Briefs! I'm sure you must have heard my 'Squee!!!!' of pure delight clear across the Atlantic when my agent passed on the news!
Cheers
Portia
PORTIA DA COSTA
intense.passionate.erotic.romance
http://wendyportia.blogspot.com
CHANCE OF A LIFETIME, Spice Briefs, Nov 2008
TWICE THE PLEASURE, Spice Briefs, May 2009
Well, thank god for SueB
Well, thank god for SueB and her legitimate questions keeping us on track
SueB, you've asked a good question and I'm glad you raised it -- "Will my story fit in your line?"
Here's the thing. So far with Spice I've tried really hard for the focus to be on a great story with great writing, first and foremost. If you've read a cross-section of Spice books, you'll see that some have a darker, edgier tone, like Megan Hart's novels, some are more fun, like Kayla Perrin's Getting Some, some are serious, like Jina Bacarr's The Blonde Geisha, and others have a HEA, like Sarah McCarty's Caine's Reckoning.
Everything can fit into the Spice program, theoretically. We haven't published a paranormal yet -- though Jina did do a time-travel with Naughty Paris -- but that doesn't mean that I'm not willing to put more in the schedule. It just has to be the right one, always keeping in mind the great story and great writing.
HEA are not a requirement for Spice books. What I've always stated is that the ending must be satisfying, meaning that whatever question, problem, conflict or issue raised in the story is resolved by the last page, whether or not that means one man and one woman ride off into the sunset together.
Dark and edgy stories are great, so don't feel that you have to write some happy, perky characters or plot to sell your story. If your book is dark and edgy, so be it. Be true to your story.
As for the swearing, it's absolutely fine so long as it fits with the character and doesn't become distracting. Cuss away!
Hi Portia!
Thanks for stopping in to say hello! I love your short story, and am so glad to have it for Spice Briefs. Hope you can pop by later in the week if you think of any questions for me...
Actually, I'd just like to
Actually, I'd just like to second Megan's question re. single author anthologies. I'm really fond of writing BDSM and power exchange stories, and I'd love to do a single author antho on that theme.
Portia
PORTIA DA COSTA
intense.passionate.erotic.romance
http://wendyportia.blogspot.com
CHANCE OF A LIFETIME, Spice Briefs, Nov 2008
TWICE THE PLEASURE, Spice Briefs, May 2009
*kicks dirt and
*kicks dirt and mumbles*
I did have a question though - single author anthos - yea or nay?
Lauren *properly chastened, snort*
Lauren Dane
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Holiday Seduction with Jaci Burton - November
Undercover - Berkley Heat - December 2
What Happens in Vegas...After Dark - May 09
Hey Victoria!
Historicals are a very good topic for this forum. I am seeing a fair share of historical submissions in Spice these days, and I have to be very particular about what to acquire. As we ramp up to (hopefully) one book per month, I have to keep in mind the balance of historicals vs. contemporary and not have too many of one or the other.
Currently in Spice we have a western historical series, a couple of very different Victorians, a WWII-era, and there's a medieval coming down the pike. I would never turn down a fantastic historical, but it would have to be very special to "earn" a spot within Spice right at this moment. Now, I don't mean to discourage anyone from submitting an historical to Spice. If anyone's got one, please do send it.
As for what I'm looking for....you'll get bored hearing me say it, but the answer is always: great writing. That's the bottom line. All time periods, all countries and settings are welcome. And, of course, research and detail must be meticulous.
Thanks
Thanks Susan, for the comments. I'll keep editing away. I hope to send it in this month. I guess I'll never know if I don't send it in, right? I'm sort of new to the whole erotic romance genre. I've only read a handful of stories and have noticed the darker edges to some of the breifs. Thought I would give it a shot.
What's the turn around time looking like for the slush pile? I think I heard six months somewhere...
Oh, and by the way, the clown story sounds hilarious. I'd buy it.
Portia and Megan - I recognize your names from the 70 days of sweat with sven. How's the sweating?
I'm so behind on my quota for the day. I really need to stop surfing the web and write...
SueB
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My Website ~ Coming Soon!
single author anthos -- yay or nay?
They're a 'Yay'.
(Just a note -- Anthologies are multi-story volumes written by several authors. Collections are several stories written by one author.)
We published Enchanted, Nancy Madore's collection of erotic fairy tales in 2006, and have her second volume coming this fall. So yes, it's definitley something we would consider.
Hi SueB Hello, fellow
Hi SueB
Hello, fellow sweater! How are you doing? I'm managing to keep up my 1K per day... but then I need to be doing, seeing as I'm one of the sponsors!
I do think it helps though... really motivates me!
Happy Sweating!
Portia
PORTIA DA COSTA
intense.passionate.erotic.romance
http://wendyportia.blogspot.com
CHANCE OF A LIFETIME, Spice Briefs, Nov 2008
TWICE THE PLEASURE, Spice Briefs, May 2009
Thanks for the word on
Thanks for the word on single author collections. I'll rummage through my story notions file. I have one novella done and finished, plus *lots* of other ideas!
Portia
PORTIA DA COSTA
intense.passionate.erotic.romance
http://wendyportia.blogspot.com
CHANCE OF A LIFETIME, Spice Briefs, Nov 2008
TWICE THE PLEASURE, Spice Briefs, May 2009
About Spice Briefs...
So far all of my answers have been referring to Spice books, as in the full-length novels. But it occurs to me that some of you might be wondering about the same things for our Spice Brief e-books.
At the moment, literally anything goes for Spice Briefs. We've published just about every genre so far, and there's no limit to the number of contemporaries, historicals, paranormals, etc... that I can buy to fill the program. The same caveat of great writing still applies, but we are able to accept more submissions for the line because we're publishing that many more stories.
...Second Verse is
...Second Verse is paranormal Susan...
*facing corner with dunce cap on*
M
my website: Read in bed!
Find me at Love is an Exploding Cigar
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Maverick Authors
Turn-around times...
For Spice Briefs, we're working our way through a huge backlog of submissions, so turn-around time is somewhere around 3-6 months. However once we're caught up it should be 3 months or sooner.
For Spice novels, we try to respond within three months.
Whoopsie
I meant that we hadn't published any paranormals yet...sorry I wasn't clear! I edited that post...
I just didn't want you to
I just didn't want you to be surprised...
"Oh, M's next book. WHAT THE -- WHAT -- THIS IS -- WELL I WASN'T EXPECTING --"
And then the clowns would come out.
M
my website: Read in bed!
Find me at Love is an Exploding Cigar
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Maverick Authors
Spice novels vs. briefs
Susan - My questions were actually refering to the briefs, not the novels. Sorry if I wasn't clear. Right now I only have a couple of brief ideas in the queue. I think I may need to read a few more spice novels before I tackle one. *wink*
Thanks for the info on the turn around times for the slush piles. They are right about where I thought they would be...
Thanks Megan, for the info. Loved your online read, btw.
Portia - I went over my Sven writing quota the past couple of days - very proud of that. I'm afraid I've been slacking today, though...
SueB
Group Blog ~ http://embracetheshadows.wordpress.com/
My Website ~ Coming Soon!
OMG, Megan...
Joking aside, what I've
Joking aside, what I've loved so much about writing for Spice is the freedom to write the books I really *want* to write without feeling like I have to shoehorn them into some sort of mold.
The book I'm working on now is different even for me (don't be scared, Susan!) though of course the more I write on it the more I realize it's NOT different. Apparently I have themes and a "voice" who knew?
Anyway, the point is, I'm taking a bit longer with it because it's challenging me, and I love that I'm able to write it for Spice because Susan doesn't say "slot A and Tab B is all we're looking for."
M
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Oooh... another question.
Oooh... another question. Does the 'all countries' apply to contemporaries as well as historicals?
For full length Spice novels, that is... :)
PORTIA DA COSTA
intense.passionate.erotic.romance
http://wendyportia.blogspot.com
CHANCE OF A LIFETIME, Spice Briefs, Nov 2008
TWICE THE PLEASURE, Spice Briefs, May 2009
Portia, my very general
Portia, my very general answer is yes, any country would be fine in contemporaries too.
However, authors should bear in mind who their audience is when they're choosing the setting for their books. We all know France, Spain, Australia, England, etc... but is the average reader in middle America going to be interested in reading a book set in, say, Belgrade? If it was a literary novel, the world is your oyster. But when it comes to erotica you have to imagine the reader at the bookstore, a sea of erotica books to choose from before them. Is she going to choose the super hot novel set in the English countryside, or the one set in Serbia? Chances are, they're going to pick the setting they're more familiar with.
Again, that's not to say it's right or better to stick with the usual settings, and it's not at all to say that any culture or people is less interesting than another. We all know that's not true. But there's also a reason books set in the US, England and France sell so well. Just be cautious
Pre published books
Hi Susan and everyone else. I am new here but I have a question. I write paranormal erotic romance and had 4 e-books published with another publisher. They closed and I got the rights to my books back. I have self published the three in the vampire series and submitted the other one to you. Do you concider books that have been published as mine have?
Thanks for that answer,
Thanks for that answer, Susan. And I totally understand the reasoning. It's so much easier to connect with a book if you've a degree of familiarity with, or a fondness for, the setting.
I'm just happy that UK settings are good for Spice! My stories are almost always set in England.
PORTIA DA COSTA
intense.passionate.erotic.romance
http://wendyportia.blogspot.com
CHANCE OF A LIFETIME, Spice Briefs, Nov 2008
TWICE THE PLEASURE, Spice Briefs, May 2009
Oh how cool!
Susan came out to play. I see all the good story lines have been taken. Wish I had thought of the clowns first.
Or maybe the grasshopper angel ;-)
Hi all. Just swung by to say hi. Spice really is a geat house to write for. And Susan really does mean it when she says it's all about the story so don't be afraid to submit because you're unsure it's right for Spice.
Sarah, waving in a drive by posting
Hi Savannah!
Acquiring previously-published books is not unheard of. Nancy Madore self-published Enchanted when we bought it. There are certain cases where we would not choose to buy a certain book -- level of distribution, quantites sold, etc... -- but from the sounds of it yours wouldn't be a problem.
Pre published books
Thanks Susan I will see what I can do with that. I would love to be in your stable of authors. I know lots of people who love the Harlequin lines. I have read some myself.
Savannah Black
Spice Briefs question...
Hi Susan! I've got a question about Spice Briefs. How does the selection process go? For example, are all the submissions read by one person first, and then they get weeded out there or moved up the chain of command? Thanks!
Prepublished and workin' to change that!
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Hi Susan!
I'm one of the historical writers with Spice. My spice book entitled Addicted is a Victorian set, and the hero is different than what you would find in 'mainstream' historical fiction. I love that about Spice, Susan's willingness to look at different things and to bring books to readers that might not have found a home. I love Spice's diversity not only as a writer, but as a reader, too. There's a large scope to the Spice books, and that goes a long way with readers. We like diversity.
Now, um...what about urban fantasy...cough, cough...just askin'
Charlotte
Erotic and passionate historical romance...
www.charlottefeatherstone.net
Addicted~Feb 09 Spice
Winter's Desire~Nov 09 Spice
Sinful~Feb 10 Spice
Can a brief be stretched?
Hi Susan,
My question concerns the word count for Spice Briefs. I note the ceiling of 15K. I have a 17K manuscript that feels like a good fit for the Spice line. The manuscript was originally over 24K and I've cut it down to 17. Would I need to trim another 2K to be considered? Or is there some wiggle room in there? I don't want to sub something that is destined for the trash because of word count.
K.B.
Hi.....
Thanx Jo for pointing me in this direction...
1. Megan...clowns? You know what they say about big feet.......
2. Susan - question on the historical aspect. Would 'pirates' be considered something you would look at for a Brief?
Thanx!
Nini :)
"Earth laughs in flowers"...........Ralph Waldo Emerson
2008 Participating author in Pass the Plot
2009 Participating author in Write a Date with Destiny
SB selection process...
Hi Jodie, thanks for dropping in!
Right now we are a group of five editors and freelancers reading the Spice Briefs submissions, including myself. Everything we read is basically sorted into a "Yes" or "No" pile. I personally read all the submissions in the "Yes" pile, and from there I select which ones to acquire for the program.
Word count
Hi KB!
Your question about word count in Spice Briefs is a good one. Although our word count max is 15K, if we saw a really great 17K-word submission we wouldn't turn it down. However, I do want to emphasize that we *do* want to keep within those parameters as much as possible, so if you do see an opportunity to edit your story down, I encourage you to do it first. But, if you're satisfied that 17K is as lean as you can be, by all means send it in!
On the flip side, we are sticklers for the minimum word count of 5K words. Anything less than that, no matter how good, will either be rejected or sent back to the author to add more to it.
Thanks, Susan!
I've got a Brief wanna be :-) sitting in your surely massive TBR pile, so I was just curious as to the process. Thanks for indulging me. I'm sure I'll have more questions later as I try to create more of these!
I love the opportunity to write someting so, well, brief! I love writing, love crafting a story, but sometimes the full length stories are too long for me in this busy life! This seems the perfect way for me to be able to indulge my passion for writing and still have time for family. Thanks for the opportunity!!
Prepublished and workin' to change that!
Winner of the BIG FINISH 2 2008
Participant in PASS THE PLOT 2008
Participant in DATE WITH DESTINY 2009
Pirates? Oh my...
Hi Nini...
Sure, why not pirates in Spice Briefs? And if your hero is anything like Captain Jack Sparrow, all the better
I always encourage writers to go with whatever muse captures them and rarely say no to any ideas because, as with any book or short story, it's all in the execution! It may be fabulous or it may not work. You never know till you write it.
How we work with Spice Brief edits
Last night I was thinking about Spice Briefs and what helpful information I could pass along. I thought I might just briefly mention how the editing process works for SB, because it's quite different from our print books.
We receive SB submissions via the SB email address (spicebriefs@harlequin.ca). Unlike our print books, which go through several editing stages on top of author revisions, Briefs only get one edit.
When we're deciding on which stories to acquire, part of our criteria is that the story is in the best possible shape editorially speaking. Because of very tight deadlines with our production and internet teams, authors do not get a chance to do revisions to their SB manuscript -- once we've acquired your story, that's the last you'll see of it until it's published online. This is why it's imperative that your submission is as polished and as perfect as you can make it and, equally important, that you're satisfied with what you've written.
The newly acquired story then goes to a copy editor who corrects any technical errors -- grammar, spelling, fixes any repetition or inconsistencies. After that, a whole whack of magical things happen with the computer whizzes (i.e. not me) to get it formatted and translated to electronic files (I'm totally making up this terminology) and then, poof! it's available for sale online.
So be sure that when you submit your Brief that you've gone over it with a fine-toothed comb, and maybe even have another pair of eyes give it the once-over to be sure it's exactly as you want it.
Susan -- something I've
Susan -- something I've always wondered about the Spice novels that others might want to know about, too...
Do they all go to Audible?
How do you (or who does) determine which go to foreign editions, and how is it decided what languages they're translated into? And why do they sometimes get different covers, while other times they're kept the same?
M
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Find me at Love is an Exploding Cigar
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