Pass The Plot!: Discussion Room

Are you following the "Pass The Plot!" story? It's our fun new writing challenge this summer, featuring a story start written by Blaze author Rhonda Nelson! Rhonda gets us started, then eight randomly selected writers from the sign-up page keep us going. They'll have one week to get the chapter in for our reading pleasure--to be posted on Mondays by noon, EST at the very latest (because the hosty is on Pacific time and she has to be awake to post). Then Rhonda will come in and wrap it all up for us!

Here's the rules:

  • Chapter is to be no more than 1000 words (please try to stay over 800, to be fair to the other players).
  • Language and action must be PG-13: Please avoid swear words and explicit sexuality.
  • Earn points on your chapter for including "Key Words"--list with point amounts provided below.
  • Points will be calculated by the host and once a chapter is up, there's no going back to add in more!

The Writer's Assignments:

Chapter One: JodieG
Chapter Two: Nini
Chapter Three: andrez
Chapter Four: writer2b
Chapter Five: AC Welsh
Chapter Six: NWinchester
Chapter Seven: joromance
Chapter Eight: Kathleen g


This Summer's Category: Harlequin Blaze

The series features sensuous, highly romantic, innovative stories that are sexy in premise and execution. The tone of the books can run from fun and flirtatious to dark and sensual. Writers can push the boundaries in terms of characterization, plot and explicitness. Submissions should have a very contemporary feel — what it's like to be young and single today. Heroes and heroines should be in their early 20s and up. We want to see an emphasis on the physical relationship developing between the couple


Key Word List (phrases in quotes):

military= 1 pt
hungry=1 pt
Any variation of the word "sexy" = 1 pt
"Former Army Ranger" = 5 pts
"red stiletto heel(s)"= 5 pts
Any variation of the word "blaze"= 5 pts
scotch= 5 pts
undercover = 5 pts
"Wrong Bed" = 10 pts
"The tantalizing curve" = 20 pts

So if you're enjoying the twists and turns or getting a kick out of how each writer has worked in the keywords and phrases, come in and tell us about it! Join the fun!


Click HERE to read the chapters, then come back here to post comments!

First Things First...

I'll need all of the selected writers to email me at laideebug @ g mail dot com (all obvious corrections made to the address, of course) so that I can verse you on how and when to submit your chapters! :)

That said...let the game begin!

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

Love the beginning!

How cool! I'm excited to read what everyone's going to write...to see how their brains work in a collaboration!

NIni :)

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

Whoa, Rhonda!

Great opening!!! The wheels are already a-spinnin' in my head.....

Dee, how soon do you need the chapter from me?

Jodie {{doing the happy dance}}

 

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Well, the chapter goes up on Monday...

So I'll need all chapters turned in to my email by Sunday, 9pm EST. (It gives me just enough time to get it posted and formatted before the girls start demanding their bottomless supply of nightmilk. :) )

Dee 

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

Okeydokey!

How are the girls feeling, by the way??

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Hey Ms. Dee...

I'm confused.

You said you needed ALL the chapters in by Sunday.  I thought this was a week by week thing.  I mean when Jodie writes her chapter, then the next one can write, and after that - so on and so forth.  Yes?  Or do they all do chapter one and then you choose?  Then pick names again?

Nini

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

I think what Dee meant by needing all chapters is that each chapter is due by the Sunday of the assigned week and NOT that all the chapters are due this Sunday...got it?

 

Jayne 

Jayne's right!

LOL, Nini, you've been spending time in Jodie's law office, haven't you? I gotta whip out my legalese when dealing with you two. :)

As no one can write the continuing chapter to something they haven't read, no, all chapters will be due the Sunday AFTER the chapter preceeding their assignment. So, Jodie's is due August 3rd. Then the next writer is due August 10th. And so on. Like dominoes. 

:)
Dee

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

Oooops!

Looking at the list of chosen on the other thread I though writer2b was first.

So okay...

You go Jodie!!!!!!!!!

Laughing 

Love it!

Great opening. Can't wait to see where you go with this Jodie.

Dee and Jayne...

I used to be a legal secretary for many years...i know legalese...however..i'm sick.  Head cold i think.  Throat's all swollen, headache, bodyaches...blech.

Seriously when i read that, i thought how is that possible????  And then Jodie set me straight and though i saw it, my head was all fuzzled...

And then last night i found 2 wasps in my house...i'm not doing good! Frown

Nini

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

But Nini...

I want to blame the legal profession!!! :)

Smooch---feel better soon, hon. :)

Dee 

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

Nini, sorry to hear that you

Nini, sorry to hear that you are feeling so miserable. Feel better soon!

Nancy

thrilled

thrilled with the opportunity to contribute and am happy i'm somewhere in the middle. must concentrate and treat like the Writer's Challenge thread so i don't panic.

excited to see your section Jodie! happy writing!

"Life is pain Highness, anyone who tells you otherwise is selling you something." - Dred Pirate Roberts, The Princess Bride
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Hey Gang...

I'm not ignoring anyone that emailed, I'm waiting to hear from all the participants still, so I can address you all in a single group. There's still several who haven't checked in, so if we don't hear from them soon, we'll have to go with the alternates. :)

Hugs,
Dee

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

While we're waiting....

Do we only use the special words once, or can we use them more frequently? Do we get points every time we use them?

Oy.....I'm frozen here thinking of what to write! The pressure!!  I have my first line, though. :-)

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Yup!

You can use them as often as you like--or as you can, lol. You'll get points every time. Have fun with them.

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

how cool

I was very tickled to be picked, and a little releived to see that i didn't have to go first. Phew! But then again chapter seven seems a long way a way.

As for the key words will they stay the same for each chapter? or will they change for each one?????

Eager to get started, jo

"Diamonds are a girls best friend!"
"Until aunt flo visits, then it's Midol!"
Participating author in "Pass the Plot" Summer Edition

Dee...

Perhaps some of them are at RWA.....

Nini :)

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

Hi Jo!!

Yeah, being first is a little scary.  Tongue out So far, I've had to name the heroine (her name starts with J!), come up with some physical descriptions (I'm not doing them all....I'm leaving some for the next one up!), and the beginnigs of a plot (egad, I hope it's not boring!! I don't want to ruin the great start Rhonda gave us!!!)

I've got about 650 words so far, and I'm liking where it's taking me.....it's starting to flow.  I'm going to try to get it to Dee a wee bit early so she can rein me in if necessary. Innocent

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

hey jodie-Jody here!

Nice to meet a fellow Jody. Yeah i'll bet it is starting first, but by the time it gets to me the details will be out and the plot churning towards the conclusion which i hope i dont totally screw up! yikes.

but still it's fun.

jody

"Diamonds are a girls best friend!"
"Until aunt flo visits, then it's Midol!"
Participating author in "Pass the Plot" Summer Edition

OK, so I've emailed Dee my chapter!

1000 words, on the nose! Tongue out Those writing challenges we do on the WC thread are definitely good practice for that, LOL!

 Now I'm just sweating it out, hoping a) it's still PG-13 Wink and b) not boring!!

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

wow that was fast

Jodie, you rock. I don't think mine will be in quite that fast. Can't wait to read it!

Laughing

"Diamonds are a girls best friend!"
"Until aunt flo visits, then it's Midol!"
Participating author in "Pass the Plot" Summer Edition

Go Jodie!

Can't wait to read it! Laughing

So, Jodie's chapter...

I've said before that I love Jodie's work. Let me tell you, gang, this chapter is no exception. I can't find a single thing I'd even consider changing. She's set up the plot (which I'M excited about), created sensual tension, a fiesty heroine (all from a pair of red heels!) and even managed to point out why she's under the bed instead of in it.

I probably should have just emailed Jodie back, but, well, I love tormenting folks when I get to read something and they have to wait til Monday, lol.

Hee hee,
Dee

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

{{Blushing furiously}}

Thanks, Dee! WOW. I'm ..... just, wow. Speechless, really. (Which is a bad thing for a woman who hopes to break into the writing game, LOL!)

Can I say you made my day? Smile 

I hope everyone enjoys it!

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Speechlessness works for writers...

it's typelessness we gotta avoid. :) I've got no worries, they'll love it.

Dee 

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

Dee I sent

Dee I sent an email to you, I'm sorry I didn't check in sooner. I'm so excited about this. Laughing

Jodie I can't wait to read your chapter!  It sounds good!

Dee...

...do you love tormenting us?Wink Jodie, I look forward to your set up.

Nancy

Nancy...

Of course I do, lol.

PS--someone has to tell Nini she's not off the hook yet. I haven't heard from everyone yet. :)  If I don't hear from the remainders by Tuesday, I'll be calling on the alternates. :)

Dee 

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

OMG!! OMG!!!

I'm here...and i'm ready to do battle!

Nini :)

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

Nibble, nibble....

nibble, nibble, nibble....there go the fingernails on one hand! I keep telling myself this is just like posting a story on the WC thread, but I don't believe myself....Tongue out 

Hey, Jody! Nice to meet someone who shares my name. These boards are so much fun...I met someone else who shares my birthday the other day! Cool   And I love all the support we can find here, especially from other people as obsessed as we are!!

 Rhonda, are you going to come play with us?

 

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Rhonda went to Nationals...

So she's going to be a few days---if you  haven't gone to Nationals, suffice it to say, you feel like death for a few days afterward. Especially if you cross three time zones.

Sleep well, Rhonda!

Dee 

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

Nini...You're up!

Hey Girl!

I never heard from Alwayswrite, so me dahlink, you're on for Chp 2! If AW contacts me, she'll take on the alternate role. :)

VERY interested to see what's going to happen next!

Dee 

Dee Tenorio
"The real art of conversation is not only to say the right thing in the right place, but also to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment."

Holy crap!

Ok....think,  think, think, think.....

 I can do this!

 Nini :)

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

JODIE!!!!!!

OMG girl. I loved loved loved your chapter. Bravo!!!! 

Thanks, Star!

(Can I use your real name on the board??) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a blast writing it....and could've written a whole lot more!

Can't wait to see what Nini comes up with! 

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Jodie

'net access was gone all weekend which wasn't bad since i knew i wouldn't get to read your bit until today.

whoot! you have set the bar high and i only hope my meager chap. 4 lives up to the set-up you've created. slight panic setting in. your chapter was über great! (er, my favorite word lately has been über...)

luck to Nini! happy writing lady! i know you'll do great.

"Life is pain Highness, anyone who tells you otherwise is selling you something." - Dred Pirate Roberts, The Princess Bride
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

LOL, Deb!

Don't even think about it til you get back from all the wedding stuff! And thank you! I think yours will be über cool, too. Cool

And hey, PS...I friend-ed you...will you friend me back? Kiss

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

Okay! Mine's done!!

I just finished it and love it!

 Nini :)

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

wow girl!

Okay Jodie, just read your chapter and i cannot believe that you are not published yet. That was awesome, he's sexy, she's cool and i can't wait to see what everyone does with it. Although i have a feeling mine wont be as great as yours, but alas i will give it my best.

That just rocked, i'd love to read an entire book of yours, it would have to be great. and yeah i'm new to posting on the boards, back into writing after a short break. Just hoping not to make a total fool of myself. But if i do, it wont kill me now will it.

jody

"Diamonds are a girls best friend!"
"Until aunt flo visits, then it's Midol!"
Participating author in "Pass the Plot" Summer Edition

Jodie, I know there is a

Jodie, I know there is a book cover with your name on it, waiting for you to plop the story in it. Wink That was a great set up.

Can't wait to see what the rest of you do with this.

Nancy

Nancy...

I've been telling her that for a long time!

Nini :)

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

Jody and Nancy...

Thank you both! Jody, I'm sure you'll do fine. I think these kinds of challenges are a lot of fun.  Oh, and I have to LOL...you have that Mae West quote as part of your signature. Not only do you and I have the same name, but she and I share(d) a birthday!

And Nancy, I'd LOL, but OMG, the mental picture I got from that had me salivating. Tongue out YES, I want a book with my name on the cover. 

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

jodie another coincidence

i think its cute the coincidences we have here. especially since you gave the heroine my sisters name. Jessica is pleased by the way!

"Diamonds are a girls best friend!"
"Until aunt flo visits, then it's Midol!"
Participating author in "Pass the Plot" Summer Edition

Jodie I bow to your

Jodie I bow to your talent!  That was so good!  I'm in line waiting at the bookstore waiting to buy your book.

 

Stephanie T.

Thanks, Stephanie!

Well, with 2 Rs under my belt in the past two months, it might be a while. :-(  But I'm not giving up! I have too much fun writing.

Thank you!

JodieG
Prepublished and workin' to change that!

A winner of the Big Finish 2 Contest, March 2008!
Participating author in Pass the Plot, Summer 2008

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Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

Ah, Nini, you don't need to

Ah, Nini, you don't need to be jealous. Next chapter we will be gushing over your writing--you do have a bit of talent yourself. Wink

Nancy

LOL..i'm not jealous!

I'm so happy for her i could just burst!!!

Nini :)

Participating author in Summer 2008 Pass the Plot

Powerful Women's Motto:

Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders & says...

'Oh hell! She's awake!!'

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