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Alison, good But not good enough.....I'm sorry but if you want the honest truth you open to many issues in this short story that need attention, yes, the getting back together is good, but why such a big openning about the accident and Lizzy if you were not going to address it Isn't this an MD romances. Okay we got the other person letting him know, The children, But their right to get their issues worked out was cut short by another one of his daughters dieing or almost die to get them to stop, way to go But I saw this coming,  However, ladies dosen't forget the fact that she was called a trapper of man, you just can't leave this up in the air, were is the justice. He didn't even apologize for god sake....come on epilogue. another thing, this takes place from one day to the next, day one hot passion the next day they fight the Baby almost die , he tells her to go just to stop her and she fall for this no way after being insulted..this needs work.

I apologize Alison but I know you can do better. 

I don't know, But this is turning out to be to tipico, for here comes' the forgive me's, the oh no not again, I can't lose another child feeling. The worries, the pain, the hurt will bring them together and forget everything else....I don't know but this needs more then just a quick out, this needs a more get to the point kind of thing before the happily everafter comes in.... Good luck Alison in answering all of the open issues...I'll be looking foward to your ending, if in fact it is an ending...Unless there is a kind of series to this one.. An italian Md and the accident victum, where Belindas and Marios story ends off and Lizzy's being.... just kidding..... but it will be a frist in online reading don't you think......again good luck 

Issues...Issues...Issues

Here it is , The mistrust ,The Pain ,The Hurt, But most of all the children. Now we know he didn't want them, he didn't want to be trap. But how could he know what she had in her mine, she never intended to trap him, She just wanted somthing to love to remember her of the night of bliss they had. No string attach. She did'nt know what was in his heart. all she knew was that he was going to confront the other lady that night. How was she to know that Mario loved her after only one night of bliss? not to mention the fact that she had to run to the hospital to see about her mother, He gave her no personal information So it's not a trap, she only took the children there to know the other half  their background not to look for him or did she? this should be a full story.

then there is the issue of Lizzy and her part in this.

How could he? Good for you Belinda do it again....lol

One question: How is the Auther going to summuerize all this in only three chapter? Boy I"m looking foward to this it's going to be good. Can't wait for the surprises...lol

This had to happen...So now we know that it was one of the children...but how long before he puts two and two together....or the Why? didn't you tell me the children were your and not LIzzy.....Here comes the what, when, and how long ago questions and are they mine hmm.....Will she regret now not telling him before going back to bed with him?, is her heart going to be shatter from the words he'll say to her or will she retaliate by saying she didn't have a last name and didn't want to hurt his family if he had one?  Wow so many thinks are about to happen...I wonder what?

Wait........What happen! to Belinda's confustion, Of what will happen when he finds out about the children, where is her thought of thinking, to soon to go to bed, she just got there, what happen to taking it all in and realizing that this man was indeed the father of her twins, the one the took her to another world in time with his lovemaking, she can't be that naive to forget what happen after that one night, wow.... all that and she stills jump back into what got her there in the frist place, this is carzy. can't wait to see what's going to happen now, will she regret or  just takes what comes after.

 

any other explanation..the nanny or nurse or housekeeper are the ones that are going to notice the resemblance and inform Mario... as for Mario the heat that Belinda is invoking in him will turn on her as well. I just hope that they both have time to think and put the children first... Yes I know we love the passion, the love ,the faith and the hope of some day having a dream life but will they... that is the question?

 

Please make this a full length book or give us  series of short story that relate to this one cause you got my attention

This looks to me that the nurse that took care of his daughter " Bella" is the one that will put ideas in his head, about the children looking somewhat like his baby girl , maybe he has a picture of his baby girl on him or near by and also the verification given to him by Lizzy when he gose to check upon her, maybe asking her about the children and her saying that they are not her's but " Belindas " seeing that lizzy will be under the infulence of medication.

can't wait for the next chapter