Header PromotionRival’s Desire
Reviewed by empire76 on October 4th, 2008, 7:43pm
Format: Print Books
Series: Kimani Press Kimani Romance
My reaction to this story is mixed. I definitely enjoyed the storyline of two people who've known each other from childhood, falling in love. And there are some really great moments of dialogue, narration etc., which make it enjoyable. With some very entertaining sub-characters, like two conniving old women, the story offers a few chuckles and is very believable.
On the other hand, the hero didn't really touch me as they usually do (and this might be a little personal or due to me being unfamiliar with this author's style). Another thing that didn't work for me was the progression of the story, which seemed to be, IMHO, in many bits/chunks, rather than a continuous whole.
Nevertheless, Altonya Washington definitely convinced of Caesar and Vivian's conflicts and their love for each other. I bought into their happy ending.
Every time we say let there be in any form, something happens - Stella Terrill Mann
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